MalakAlhaq

Post any story you would like to get critiqued on. It goes like this, post a story. The next person will critique the story, then post their own short story. The following person will critique thier story, then post thier own short story....

Surrender your shoulders. We demand it! And welcome back.

Just because we work for the machine's, doesn't mean we are machine's ourselves. We're human, well... most of us are. And us machine operatives are born to have fun. Case and point: TC's Anniversary Party.

Drats. Foiled Again!

Is it possible to change the "world events" link in-game to display perhaps, another page on the internet through the user opts.

Garu wrote: MalakAlhaq wrote: So, then a red-pill is used to "sike" the matrix and the machines into beleiveing that a newly awakened red-pill is dead? That is correct. After taking the red pill, Neo experiences a "death" in the Matrix. Th...

Good Point. So, I would have to agree with your "pipeline" theory. That sounds the most logical and sensical to me. Also, you make sense with the jarring bluepills awake. That's where the said bluepills phsycy comes in. If they are the rig...

So, then a red-pill is used to "sike" the matrix and the machines into beleiveing that a newly awakened red-pill is dead?

So, the liquidation process would happen in the pods? I thought that perhaps they would be "Mass Luquidfied", as to keep with the Efficentcy, or however you spell it. The only case I would have against your theory Ikkaku, is that they are...

I've been trying to figure this out. In the first instalment, Neo after being awakened, slides down that long tube and into a ginat vat of... Well... who knows what. My question is, do newly awakened redpills end up the same place the dead...

I would say... Change all the gang spawns to be zombies. Same level, just different look. But, I agree with Drag. Time is too slow.

MxO:CTF v.2 September 9 http://forums.station.sony.com/mxo/posts/list.m?topic_id=36300002281

Vagrath was a good fighter... Congratulations on a job well done Zionites. We'll be meeting soon.

Meek... *fires secretary* AWAY! O.o ... Nevermind. Alas, I havent seen her face to face in a long time... That still doesnt change the fact that CoS is an awsome faction. Really, any machine faction I'm cool with

Good bunch of players I lover them all! Well... At least I lover Alice the most. And the rest, I'm sure are just as great *Edit* Dang smily not workin... Message Edited by MalakAlhaq on 03-25-2006 11:28 AM

Have you heard about this? Instead of the flop "Enter the Matrix" was, They are making a new Matrix game for the current consoles. And you get to Play as Neo. Personally I think, as far as the story goes, Enter the matrix was useful. But G...