The first draft version of that, for the sake of comparison, although not all that much changed really:
scene 1
- zoom out from inert Wright to Architect viewing in his monitoring room
- a: where is thy humanity now...
- a: agent gray
- gray appears on monitor
- g: sir?
- a: have you located the program?
- g: no, sir; not since it terminated Wright.
- g: we have found zion operatives conducting their own search.
- a: ...
- g: sir?
- a: prepare for our visitors
- clicks screen off
scene 2
- ghost lands on a slum building rooftop, looks around, opens a door and goes down a dark stairway
- enters a large darkened storage room, doesn't see anything, turns to leave
- screen flicks on behind him
- s: ghost.
- ghost turns and looks at it, face blank
- code shimmers in the air and falls down, forming around a standing female body
- ghost stands frozen
- trinity takes a step toward him, stops
- t: ghost...
- ghost flinches
- trinity looks pained
- g: I...
- t: I didn't know
- p: freeze
- pace steps from the doorway into the glow of the monitor/trinity, gun levelled at g
- p looks at g
- p: predictable.
- p: hmh.
- p put her gun up, half turns away
- p: your program...friend cannot survive here
- g looks at p
- p: she will be removed. a code lock is already--
- h & ts appear in midair, float down to the floor
- p puts her gun back on g
- ts: ooh. this looks fun.
- p touches her earpiece, listens, looks frustrated
- p: ... acknowledged.
- pace stalks out
- h: and you? will you offer resistance?
- g: no need
- h looks around; trinity has vanished
- h: is this your--
- ghost has vanished
- ts: hah! this *will* be fun
- h & ts vanish, room goes dark
- a shadow hops up to a high window: ookami
scene 3
- ghost is standing on the roof, looking out over the city
- g: trinity...








































































































