(( The story below is something I came up with in the last hour or so... its the first part of a story about my character.
I wont give away anything at this point, but Id like people to read it and tell me what they think of it.
When I have a new part, I will update the thread ))
She didn't know why she was here.
She knew she probably shouldn't even be here - but she was.
Although she had only been awakened for a few years, it might as well have been a lifetime ago for her,
the streets she grew up on, the dull apartment blocks of Rogers Way were still the same, the gangs still ran
the streets here. Things were exactly as she remembered, but different as well.
The last time she was here, was to tell her mother that she was going to meet a few friends after work but would
come around and see her later in the week. Only... she wasn't going to meet a few friends after work.
Fate had other plans for her - 2 hours and a red-pill later, she was supposedly 'free' from a prison she never knew
existed.
The real question - was why was she back here now? She wasn't on any kind of mission or official business and it's
common knowledge that redpills aren't meant to visit people they knew as bluepills... but she didn't care about that right now. Guidelines, regulations, rules - screw it all. She had to know the truth.
Walking across from the Northwest area of Rogers Way, she entered the apartment block she knew previously as home. The stench of mould, urine and decay filled the air.
Making her way slowly towards the only working elevator in the building, she hit the button for floor 14.
Slowly, noisily - the elevator made it's way to the floor she requested. The smell and state of the elevator itself
was interesting; blood, urine, various other stains she didn't recognise all melded together making the elevator seem more used than it really was - most people took the stairs for the very reason that elevators were often used as bathrooms.
Arriving at floor 14, she walked down a narrow hallway, past several doors until she approached one in particular.
Removing her sunglasses and putting them in her shirt pocket, she ran her fingers down the door-frame.
The dent in the door from the time her father was seriously ill... the medics nearly smashed the door open with the
stretcher... the mark was still there on that door - just as it was on her.
She started to think back - her father, so ill at the time - seemingly so little they could do for him, if only they
knew what she now knows... they could have saved him.
Shaking her head, she cleared the visions from her mind, her eyes darting to the sign on the door itself.
'Apartment available for Rent - contact the landlord for details. (555) 2517-214'.
She knew in her heart what this meant, there was little doubt - but she still had to be sure that what she felt was
true.
She left the apartment building - heading back into the depths of Rogers Way...
I wont give away anything at this point, but Id like people to read it and tell me what they think of it.
When I have a new part, I will update the thread ))
She didn't know why she was here.
She knew she probably shouldn't even be here - but she was.
Although she had only been awakened for a few years, it might as well have been a lifetime ago for her,
the streets she grew up on, the dull apartment blocks of Rogers Way were still the same, the gangs still ran
the streets here. Things were exactly as she remembered, but different as well.
The last time she was here, was to tell her mother that she was going to meet a few friends after work but would
come around and see her later in the week. Only... she wasn't going to meet a few friends after work.
Fate had other plans for her - 2 hours and a red-pill later, she was supposedly 'free' from a prison she never knew
existed.
The real question - was why was she back here now? She wasn't on any kind of mission or official business and it's
common knowledge that redpills aren't meant to visit people they knew as bluepills... but she didn't care about that right now. Guidelines, regulations, rules - screw it all. She had to know the truth.
Walking across from the Northwest area of Rogers Way, she entered the apartment block she knew previously as home. The stench of mould, urine and decay filled the air.
Making her way slowly towards the only working elevator in the building, she hit the button for floor 14.
Slowly, noisily - the elevator made it's way to the floor she requested. The smell and state of the elevator itself
was interesting; blood, urine, various other stains she didn't recognise all melded together making the elevator seem more used than it really was - most people took the stairs for the very reason that elevators were often used as bathrooms.
Arriving at floor 14, she walked down a narrow hallway, past several doors until she approached one in particular.
Removing her sunglasses and putting them in her shirt pocket, she ran her fingers down the door-frame.
The dent in the door from the time her father was seriously ill... the medics nearly smashed the door open with the
stretcher... the mark was still there on that door - just as it was on her.
She started to think back - her father, so ill at the time - seemingly so little they could do for him, if only they
knew what she now knows... they could have saved him.
Shaking her head, she cleared the visions from her mind, her eyes darting to the sign on the door itself.
'Apartment available for Rent - contact the landlord for details. (555) 2517-214'.
She knew in her heart what this meant, there was little doubt - but she still had to be sure that what she felt was
true.
She left the apartment building - heading back into the depths of Rogers Way...