Sure, there are parts of the story I think could have been told differently. The "cheat codes" video game terminology actually bothered me more than the "laser pew pew". Ultimately, I don't want to tell the story, I want to experience it. Personally, I have lost interest in this part of the storyline, and that's the worst thing that can happen to a story. I can see what Chadwick was trying to do with Anome, creating a villain people could sympathize with, like Cypher, but I just didn't connect. Maybe it was because the story progressed too slowly (8 months was WAY too long for this thread), or because I was never on at the right time to meet the guy for Live Events, or because CloudWolf needs to explain the story to me (get to work m8
). In any case, by the time chapter 5.3 rolled around, I stopped jacking in to find out what happens next. I'm hoping 6.3 or 7.1 pulls me back in.
). In any case, by the time chapter 5.3 rolled around, I stopped jacking in to find out what happens next. I'm hoping 6.3 or 7.1 pulls me back in.
