Walls of Darkness (Chap. 1)

1 posts · 2006-03-08 14:20:00 to 2006-03-08 14:20:00

#23900002550 03/08/2006 14:20 Walls of Darkness (Chap. 1)
Firram wondered why 343 Guilty Spark and 2401 Penitent Tangent were observing him from their Installations before they left to come to Tabor C. Mind telling me why I was being watched? Firram asked, glancing at Guilty. Not at all, Firram, Guilty Spark said while making a low lvl proxy. We were both watching a lot of humans from both of the Installations over the course of 101,217 years, and we came upon you, thinking that you were just going to be another plain human, going about your business....Well, before you got awakened by LinksLife's evil side, Vanon. Guilty Spark said shaking his head at Firram.
Penitent Tangent got up off the bench, and stood next to Guilty Spark, continuing what appeared to be the story. Once you were awakened by Vanon, we became interested in what you would do with your new powers. We focused our observations on you, because you obviously weren't like the other humans. Penitent Tangent said while making a proxy of his own. Then Guilty Spark picked up where Penitent Tangent stopped... 
When we were observing you from our separate Installations, we found out disturbing things that started to get us worried, like your power to awake other people's dark sides, or the power to turn people into vampires. Guilty Spark said, deactivating his proxy. Penitent Tangent looked at Guilty Spark, then nodded. Anyways, we aren't here to tell us our history of observing you. We are here to help you free LinksLife and Martel from Vanon's sword, NightShade.
Plus we are here to observe humans on a much different level. Penitent Tangent said as he took out a pad and a pen, and started to take notes on the area around him. I see....Hmm, well, I'm sure the both of you know that this sword wont break until Vanon is dead. So there isnt much of a chance that we can free Martel and Links. Firram said while letting out a sigh.
You said that you wished to communicate with them, did you not? Guilty Spark asked as he approached Firram. Guilty Spark made a hand motion that gave Firram the impression that he wanted the sword. What are you gonna do with it? Firram asked as he pulled out NightShade. I will make communication between you and them possible, so please hand it over. Guilty Spark replied, getting the sword handed to him. Penitent Tangent stopped taking notes, and came over to look at the sword.
Right when Penitent Tangent came over, a cold wind came over Firram's body.  Firram looked to his right and left, but he didnt see anyone coming. Up here, Firram. Vanon yelled, making Firram look up to the roof of the building behind the hardline.
You think that I wouldnt come here to get my sword back? Vanon asked as he jumped to the hardline, pulling out his gun.
Firram immediately got up, pulling out his Needler and taking the sword back from Guilty Spark, who was inspecting NightShade.
Actually, yes. I thought that you would of been doing other things worth your time. Firram replied, laughing.
Guilty Spark and Penitent Tangent ran to the hardline, and disappeared. You ready to hand over that sword, then die?!  Vanon screamed before shooting Firram in his left leg. Firram screamed in pain as Vanon walked over to him, shooting him in the other leg. Vanon laughed as he then shot Firram in the area near his heart, watching his face hit the ground as he fell.
Firram passed out as soon as Vanon came up to him. Now, time for you to join Links and Martel in NightShade.....Vanon said quietly as he stabbed Firram in the heart with the sword. He left it there for a couple of seconds, watching Firram's code go inside the sword. Once Firram's body disappeared, Vanon walked away holding NightShade......
((Yes, I know, 343, 2401, and the "Installations" part were indeed taken from the two Halo games. But anyways, I need some opinions here, so I know whether to keep going or trash this story.))