What is your characters backstory?
57 posts · 2006-03-03 17:37:08 to 2007-03-01 05:48:11
Handle: Yeaman.
Full name: Javier Garcia.
Also knowed as: 101303101 and Yeamaguea.
Age: Near 20
Nationality: Spanish.
Marital status: Unknow.
Organization: EPN.
Faction: Priorato de Sion.
Crew: Lanza de Longinos.
Rank: Captain.
Occupation: Chaplain.
Likes: Beautiful things, Blood and Himself.
Dislikes: Ugly things and Real World.
Special skills: Dominion of the totality of the techniques of torture and tactical and leadership abilities without comparision.
Biography:
Javier was born in a privileged spanish family, his father was ugly and his mother was extremely beautiful. She marry with his father for money and social position. Javier has a vain personality and in his childhood he grow up with a strong Edipo complex.
He has taken the alias of the man who was the responsible for the destruction of his family. The original Yeaman was a operative from zion who had been watching Javier for a long time in order to rectruit him. When the original Yeaman saw Javier´s mother i fell in love of her and they started a secret relationship. Their madness and narcissism come from a trauma of their childhood because he saw their father killing his mother (because the infidelity). Javier carved up his father and since then it has a special scorn by the ugly people who he non doubt to kill just for fun. He started to like the blood and the violence. The incident divide his mind: eloquent and racional by day, sadistic murderer by night. At the same time he sweared revenge to the original Yeaman. After this Javier step a few years on a reformatory.
Inmediatly the Zion Headquarters decided to retire Yeaman from the Javier´s recruitment operation.
Since he was young he was constantly in and out of jail for vandalism and torturing animals. He started to investigate who was Yeaman but he couldnt find clues about who Yeaman was or where he was, he only could find lost words like "Matrix has you", "What is the matrix?" or "Take the red pill". With the porpouse of calm his anxiety of couldnt find the original Yeaman,he started committing more serious crimes such as assault, attempted murder, murder and torture people. He entered in prison with a sentence of life without parole. Inside prison he joined a ultra catholic group althoug he didnt share his way of think, he did it just for security. He read the bible and so quickly he became the leader of the movement, under his leadership the group got more power than ever and the local authorities decided to move Javier to another prison.
Zion felt that they owe a chance to start again and the truth to Javier and they didnt see a better opportunity to rescue him than the transfer.
During the transfer a team of 3 mans and 2 womans ambush the caravan and they finally got Javier. The van in wich Javier was being transported brake abrutly and he strike his head strongly, remaining unconscious. He was waked up by the force. Because of this he can not choice name,reason why he was called for his prisoner number: 101303101.
When he had finished his training, he saw the rebirth like a new chance to start and he started to change his way life, in any case,their independence and its unique style battle caused problems to him with their superior.
Zion gave him his 1º mission: he have to kill an ex-zionite who was given back to her pod to start a new life, Jean Miro. When 101303101 saw his target, he cant finish the mission, he couldnt kill a woman so beautiful, even more than his mother. He fell in love of her and they had an affair for a few weeks. Three days later he read on The Sentinel that Jean´s husband has commited murder-suicide on himself and Jean.
After this hechange his name of 101303101 to Yeaman,he became in the man who he was following.
Yeaman (Javier) was judged and he have to go away of Zion, he and his crew took refuge in the tunnels. One day he receive a message from the matrix, the message said "Im sorry" and was signed by Yeaman. The old obssesion have come back and with it the change promises were lost in the forgetfulness.
Yeaman (Javier) fought with the machines and with the merovingians (where he was knowed like Yeamaguea)looking for the original Yeaman. Finally he finish with the people of E Pluribus Neo where he has more freedom of action.
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Thats my first tale in english i hope that someone can understand it xD
I had to redo mine. And I remember having a background story during Enumerator days...eh...I guess I'll have to rewrite it.
tioneassel wrote:
this made my eyes bleed...
Handle: Yeaman.
Full name: Javier Garcia.
Also knowed as: 101303101 and Yeamaguea.
Age: Near 20
Nationality: Spanish.
Marital status: Unknow.
Organization: EPN.
Faction: Priorato de Sion.
Crew: Lanza de Longinos.
Rank: Captain.
Occupation: Chaplain.
Likes: Beautiful things, Blood and Himself.
Dislikes: Ugly things and Real World.
Special skills: Dominion of the totality of the techniques of torture and tactical and leadership abilities without comparision.
Biography:
Javier was born in a privileged spanish family, his father was ugly and his mother was extremely beautiful. She marry with his father for money and social position. Javier has a vain personality and in his childhood he grow up with a strong Edipo complex.
He has taken the alias of the man who was the responsible for the destruction of his family. The original Yeaman was a operative from zion who had been watching Javier for a long time in order to rectruit him. When the original Yeaman saw Javier´s mother i fell in love of her and they started a secret relationship. Their madness and narcissism come from a trauma of their childhood because he saw their father killing his mother (because the infidelity). Javier carved up his father and since then it has a special scorn by the ugly people who he non doubt to kill just for fun. He started to like the blood and the violence. The incident divide his mind: eloquent and racional by day, sadistic murderer by night. At the same time he sweared revenge to the original Yeaman. After this Javier step a few years on a reformatory.
Inmediatly the Zion Headquarters decided to retire Yeaman from the Javier´s recruitment operation.
Since he was young he was constantly in and out of jail for vandalism and torturing animals. He started to investigate who was Yeaman but he couldnt find clues about who Yeaman was or where he was, he only could find lost words like "Matrix has you", "What is the matrix?" or "Take the red pill". With the porpouse of calm his anxiety of couldnt find the original Yeaman,he started committing more serious crimes such as assault, attempted murder, murder and torture people. He entered in prison with a sentence of life without parole. Inside prison he joined a ultra catholic group althoug he didnt share his way of think, he did it just for security. He read the bible and so quickly he became the leader of the movement, under his leadership the group got more power than ever and the local authorities decided to move Javier to another prison.
Zion felt that they owe a chance to start again and the truth to Javier and they didnt see a better opportunity to rescue him than the transfer.
During the transfer a team of 3 mans and 2 womans ambush the caravan and they finally got Javier. The van in wich Javier was being transported brake abrutly and he strike his head strongly, remaining unconscious. He was waked up by the force. Because of this he can not choice name,reason why he was called for his prisoner number: 101303101.
When he had finished his training, he saw the rebirth like a new chance to start and he started to change his way life, in any case,their independence and its unique style battle caused problems to him with their superior.
Zion gave him his 1º mission: he have to kill an ex-zionite who was given back to her pod to start a new life, Jean Miro. When 101303101 saw his target, he cant finish the mission, he couldnt kill a woman so beautiful, even more than his mother. He fell in love of her and they had an affair for a few weeks. Three days later he read on The Sentinel that Jean´s husband has commited murder-suicide on himself and Jean.
After this hechange his name of 101303101 to Yeaman,he became in the man who he was following.
Yeaman (Javier) was judged and he have to go away of Zion, he and his crew took refuge in the tunnels. One day he receive a message from the matrix, the message said "Im sorry" and was signed by Yeaman. The old obssesion have come back and with it the change promises were lost in the forgetfulness.
Yeaman (Javier) fought with the machines and with the merovingians (where he was knowed like Yeamaguea)looking for the original Yeaman. Finally he finish with the people of E Pluribus Neo where he has more freedom of action.
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Thats my first tale in english i hope that someone can understand it xD
yuenwoping wrote:
tioneassel wrote:[color="#cc3300"][size="x-small"][face="times new roman,times"][size="small"][size="x-small"][color="#000000"]
yuenwoping wrote:
tioneassel wrote:this made my eyes bleed...
Handle: Yeaman.
Full name: Javier Garcia.
Also knowed as: 101303101 and Yeamaguea.
Age: Near 20
Nationality: Spanish.
Marital status: Unknow.
Organization: EPN.
Faction: Priorato de Sion.
Crew: Lanza de Longinos.
Rank: Captain.
Occupation: Chaplain.
Likes: Beautiful things, Blood and Himself.
Dislikes: Ugly things and Real World.
Special skills: Dominion of the totality of the techniques of torture and tactical and leadership abilities without comparision.
Biography:
Javier was born in a privileged spanish family, his father was ugly and his mother was extremely beautiful. She marry with his father for money and social position. Javier has a vain personality and in his childhood he grow up with a strong Edipo complex.
He has taken the alias of the man who was the responsible for the destruction of his family. The original Yeaman was a operative from zion who had been watching Javier for a long time in order to rectruit him. When the original Yeaman saw Javier´s mother i fell in love of her and they started a secret relationship. Their madness and narcissism come from a trauma of their childhood because he saw their father killing his mother (because the infidelity). Javier carved up his father and since then it has a special scorn by the ugly people who he non doubt to kill just for fun. He started to like the blood and the violence. The incident divide his mind: eloquent and racional by day, sadistic murderer by night. At the same time he sweared revenge to the original Yeaman. After this Javier step a few years on a reformatory.
Inmediatly the Zion Headquarters decided to retire Yeaman from the Javier´s recruitment operation.
Since he was young he was constantly in and out of jail for vandalism and torturing animals. He started to investigate who was Yeaman but he couldnt find clues about who Yeaman was or where he was, he only could find lost words like "Matrix has you", "What is the matrix?" or "Take the red pill". With the porpouse of calm his anxiety of couldnt find the original Yeaman,he started committing more serious crimes such as assault, attempted murder, murder and torture people. He entered in prison with a sentence of life without parole. Inside prison he joined a ultra catholic group althoug he didnt share his way of think, he did it just for security. He read the bible and so quickly he became the leader of the movement, under his leadership the group got more power than ever and the local authorities decided to move Javier to another prison.
Zion felt that they owe a chance to start again and the truth to Javier and they didnt see a better opportunity to rescue him than the transfer.
During the transfer a team of 3 mans and 2 womans ambush the caravan and they finally got Javier. The van in wich Javier was being transported brake abrutly and he strike his head strongly, remaining unconscious. He was waked up by the force. Because of this he can not choice name,reason why he was called for his prisoner number: 101303101.
When he had finished his training, he saw the rebirth like a new chance to start and he started to change his way life, in any case,their independence and its unique style battle caused problems to him with their superior.
Zion gave him his 1º mission: he have to kill an ex-zionite who was given back to her pod to start a new life, Jean Miro. When 101303101 saw his target, he cant finish the mission, he couldnt kill a woman so beautiful, even more than his mother. He fell in love of her and they had an affair for a few weeks. Three days later he read on The Sentinel that Jean´s husband has commited murder-suicide on himself and Jean.
After this hechange his name of 101303101 to Yeaman,he became in the man who he was following.
Yeaman (Javier) was judged and he have to go away of Zion, he and his crew took refuge in the tunnels. One day he receive a message from the matrix, the message said "Im sorry" and was signed by Yeaman. The old obssesion have come back and with it the change promises were lost in the forgetfulness.
Yeaman (Javier) fought with the machines and with the merovingians (where he was knowed like Yeamaguea)looking for the original Yeaman. Finally he finish with the people of E Pluribus Neo where he has more freedom of action.
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Thats my first tale in english i hope that someone can understand it xD
lol the colour is strong.
I liked the story though.
yuenwoping wrote:
tioneassel wrote:It "tourmented" me. I feel so "minipulated".this made my eyes bleed...
Handle: Yeaman.
Full name: Javier Garcia.
Also knowed as: 101303101 and Yeamaguea.
Age: Near 20
Nationality: Spanish.
Marital status: Unknow.
Organization: EPN.
Faction: Priorato de Sion.
Crew: Lanza de Longinos.
Rank: Captain.
Occupation: Chaplain.
Likes: Beautiful things, Blood and Himself.
Dislikes: Ugly things and Real World.
Special skills: Dominion of the totality of the techniques of torture and tactical and leadership abilities without comparision.
Biography:
Javier was born in a privileged spanish family, his father was ugly and his mother was extremely beautiful. She marry with his father for money and social position. Javier has a vain personality and in his childhood he grow up with a strong Edipo complex.
He has taken the alias of the man who was the responsible for the destruction of his family. The original Yeaman was a operative from zion who had been watching Javier for a long time in order to rectruit him. When the original Yeaman saw Javier´s mother i fell in love of her and they started a secret relationship. Their madness and narcissism come from a trauma of their childhood because he saw their father killing his mother (because the infidelity). Javier carved up his father and since then it has a special scorn by the ugly people who he non doubt to kill just for fun. He started to like the blood and the violence. The incident divide his mind: eloquent and racional by day, sadistic murderer by night. At the same time he sweared revenge to the original Yeaman. After this Javier step a few years on a reformatory.
Inmediatly the Zion Headquarters decided to retire Yeaman from the Javier´s recruitment operation.
Since he was young he was constantly in and out of jail for vandalism and torturing animals. He started to investigate who was Yeaman but he couldnt find clues about who Yeaman was or where he was, he only could find lost words like "Matrix has you", "What is the matrix?" or "Take the red pill". With the porpouse of calm his anxiety of couldnt find the original Yeaman,he started committing more serious crimes such as assault, attempted murder, murder and torture people. He entered in prison with a sentence of life without parole. Inside prison he joined a ultra catholic group althoug he didnt share his way of think, he did it just for security. He read the bible and so quickly he became the leader of the movement, under his leadership the group got more power than ever and the local authorities decided to move Javier to another prison.
Zion felt that they owe a chance to start again and the truth to Javier and they didnt see a better opportunity to rescue him than the transfer.
During the transfer a team of 3 mans and 2 womans ambush the caravan and they finally got Javier. The van in wich Javier was being transported brake abrutly and he strike his head strongly, remaining unconscious. He was waked up by the force. Because of this he can not choice name,reason why he was called for his prisoner number: 101303101.
When he had finished his training, he saw the rebirth like a new chance to start and he started to change his way life, in any case,their independence and its unique style battle caused problems to him with their superior.
Zion gave him his 1º mission: he have to kill an ex-zionite who was given back to her pod to start a new life, Jean Miro. When 101303101 saw his target, he cant finish the mission, he couldnt kill a woman so beautiful, even more than his mother. He fell in love of her and they had an affair for a few weeks. Three days later he read on The Sentinel that Jean´s husband has commited murder-suicide on himself and Jean.
After this hechange his name of 101303101 to Yeaman,he became in the man who he was following.
Yeaman (Javier) was judged and he have to go away of Zion, he and his crew took refuge in the tunnels. One day he receive a message from the matrix, the message said "Im sorry" and was signed by Yeaman. The old obssesion have come back and with it the change promises were lost in the forgetfulness.
Yeaman (Javier) fought with the machines and with the merovingians (where he was knowed like Yeamaguea)looking for the original Yeaman. Finally he finish with the people of E Pluribus Neo where he has more freedom of action.
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Thats my first tale in english i hope that someone can understand it xD
