"Exiled From Zion"

1 posts · 2006-01-01 04:49:00 to 2006-01-01 04:49:00

#11300001364 01/01/2006 04:49 "Exiled From Zion"
Ok heres my poor attempt at "story-telling"
as you will tell i suck at it, however i was bored and had to write something so here it is.

it would have been more better but as you can probably tell i was getting bored towards the end....nevermind


 

 


“Exiled From Zion”.



“racoon, sir, Commander Lock wishes to see you in his office”
“cheers promethuis”.
I stand up take one last look out of my small shabby dorm, watching the workers repair the walls of Zion from the battles against the sentinels, knowing this may be it, the end for me.
I walk down the pathway to trying to look normal, while running through all the possible scenarios through my head, looking around trying to enjoy the last time I may be in Zion.
“coon!” a voice called
Looked round and there he was, with his small innocent blue eyes glistening in the light.
“coon!, I can’t wait until you teach me how to fight later, I really cant wait” he said in his high squeaky voice.
Knowing that I may not be around then I was tempted to tell him, but I couldn’t break his heart, so on that note I kneeled down and told him.
“Neither can I Speedy, neither can I”
I watched him run of to all his friends jumping and cheering, he couldn’t be happier, only wishing I could have told him the truth.
I stood back up and progressed to Lock’s office, but now trying to think of an excuse of why I done it, however my mind was blank.
It was too late now anyway I reached his office, took one look behind me and then banged on his door.
“ENTER”, his voice bellowed
I slowly opened the door and cautiously walked in.
“Take a seat racoon”
As I didn’t want to frustrate him any more I sat down, and as I did he opened his desks draw and pulled out what looks to be a voice recorder.
“racoon, I have been looking through your files, and I am unhappy about what you have achieved while you have spent your time jacked in, you have on a numerous of times gained the interest from the sentinels and risked the lives of your Hovercraft by being at broadcast depth too long. We have already disciplined you by cutting down your allotted Hovercraft trips, but to overcome this you feel it’s ok to sneak of in the middle of the night!” he bellowed
There was a huge silence from the courtyard, I could feel everyone stopping their jobs to listen.
“And if that wasn’t enough, you have been putting young kids through combat simulations, you know the…..”
“rules? Of course I do, but come on Lock, he was doing martial arts long before he was awakened, there is nothing wrong with progressing his skills?”
I interrupted
“I don’t care if he was doing martial arts long before you were born, rules are rules”
There was a long pause, he stood up and looked out of the window behind him.
“That is all I have to say, you can go now”
Relieve, I have another life I thought, so I cautiously stood up and headed to the door, but before I could open it Lock made one last comment.
“However I recommend you go and get your best clothes on and get ready for your meeting with Ciron”.
Busted, I didn’t bother looking back I just opened the door and ran straight for my dorm



2 hours later



“racoon, Chiron wishes to see you” Promethuis shouted.
I knew this was it, there is no way they will let me jack into the matrix again.
I stood up and got changed into my best outfit, and headed to the Chiron’s office.
Upon entry there was Commander Chiron and Commander Lock sitting at the desk.
“sit down racoon, sit down” Chiron said.
“I wont bother covering what Commander Lock went through with you earlier, I sure you just want to get this over and done with.
We have reason to believe you have been passing intelligence to both the exiles and machine. Is this true?”
This is it, no way out
“Yes Commander Chiron, yes it is”
“And why were you doing this?”
“Well, ever since I got that disciplinary order, I had a lot of time to think, and well I decided it was for the best, to keep the truce active.”



45 minutes later



racoon we have no choice!, but to remove you from Zion!”  she shouted
Once again everything went quiet
“You have 1 hour to gather your stuff an take you and yourself out of Zion”
“from this moment on you are EXILLED FROM ZION, where you go is up to you, as long as it isn’t Zion”
I ran out of our office as quick as I can with those three words still ringing in my ears,
Exiled from Zion, I wasn’t expecting that at all………………………


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