Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.

14 posts · 2006-04-05 20:42:46 to 2006-04-19 06:40:35

#11200003760 04/05/2006 20:42:46 Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
Choice
By ZippydaSquirl
 
To you and to me, to be slave or free, in all mentality?
That is the question.
If I were a slave, I'd have to behave. But if I were free, it would be all about me.
If you had to choose, whether it's win or lose, whether you would die or not...
Would you take the red pill or the blue, ignorant many or knowledgable few?
Whether your heart is cold or hot?
I'd choose free, but that's just me, what on heavenly Earth would you do?
 Comfortable Slavery, Painful Freedom, the red pill...
..or the blue?
 
 
Zion-they're free, and know the truth
The Matrix they've escaped, the Machines they hate
For imprisoning them in their youth.
They wish to free all who be
Still Asleep in their pod bed.
And in order to be free, both you and me
The pill you choose must be red.
 
Machines-they control and keep
And maintain the Matrix world
Order and perfection, peace and tranquility
That would make their world.
 
The Merovingian- he's French, and knows all there is to know
Whether it's sunny, rainy, cloudy, or whether there's snow.
When you work for him, you know what there's there to know.
And when he's threatened, he merely shrugs off
Any threat or attack or blow.
And in the case of knowledge, his mind's not slow.
 
The Cypherites-Dreamers I call them, they wished to have taken the Blue
The Blue pill, that keeps them Asleep, and unknowingly serene, but not true.
They seek to "help" us in their goal
To achieve what they seem to miss.
Comfortable Slavery, unknowing happiness.
Ignorance must be bliss.
 
E Pluribus Neo - this one's odd, and radical at that.
They follow Neo, and Morpheus, and Trinity, without a drop of the hat.
Led by a zealot who's probably made a religion on it by now
This is the group that has me wondering,
"Why indeed, did the Machines not use cows?"
 
There are more groups, and more radicals, that claim their goal be true.
But when it all comes down to it, there's only TWO choices:
The red pill.......
.....or the blue?
 
(So? What'd ya think?)
#11200003761 04/05/2006 20:44:06 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
i think u need to play less mxo and find something better to do.
#11200003762 04/05/2006 20:45:48 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
Post removed.

If you don't have something constructive to add to a thread, the best course of action is not to post.

Message Edited by TheJurymen on 04-06-2006 03:13 PM

#11200003765 04/05/2006 22:37:27 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
sure, try, but don't *CENSORED* me plz im not into guys
honestly nothing wrong with writing poems, i don't wana kill a poet in u with my replies, but i think you need to change a subject of your creative endavors lol, write one for my girlfirend SMILEY

Message Edited by Mindsurfer100 on 04-05-200611:41 PM

#11200003766 04/06/2006 02:11:34 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
Getting others to write poems for your gf? - Gee...that sounds like a worthwile relationship lol
Anyways....that's pretty good, ZippydaSqirl. It's well beyond something our average MxO moron could conjur up SMILEY
#11200003767 04/06/2006 02:52:17 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
Flamebait shall not be tolerated. Please keep it on topic.

#11200003768 04/06/2006 03:03:12 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
w00t for the return of sync routine.
Back on topic, nice1 zippy  :smileyhappy:
#11200003769 04/06/2006 03:09:44 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
Very nice work indeed SMILEY
#11200003770 04/06/2006 09:59:26 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.


VampTrix wrote:

how does that not get a forum ban???  ri-goddamn-diculous


Poor little VampTrix.  I have the mods in the palm of mah hand. I've said things far worse and they just shrug it off.

I"M JUST KIDDING!

Seriously though, I was being sarcastic, and that guy was asking for it anyway. His post was not constructive in any way. All I'm asking here is some opinions and maybe changes to add.

#11200003847 04/12/2006 13:39:52 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
Machines-they control and keep
And look after the virtual world.
Everything must have a purpose or face deletion,
Yes, even the Oracle.
Whilst they appear to have no emotion
No anger, love, or hate.
It's evident in the number of Exiles
How many emotions they generate.

E Pluribus Neo - this one's odd, and radical at that.
They follow Neo, and Morpheus, and Trinity, without a drop of the hat.
Led by a zealot who's goal is to get create a world of trust
And it's evident in the motto the follow,
"In Neo, we trust."

Commandos. Sentinels. They're One and the Same.
But fairly new.
Their precise movements and quick calculations
Show that they took neither pill, red or blue.
Ten-hut! Bout-Face! And all that jazz.
Don't get in their way;
They'll kick your....azz.
#11200003854 04/13/2006 13:14:49 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
umm zippy doesnt this belong in either the  OFF TOPIC  or  NEXT RENNASIANCE  threads  and not here....   just a  friendly comment.
#11200003910 04/18/2006 18:53:23 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.





sgtclunk wrote:

umm zippy doesnt this belong in either the  OFF TOPIC  or  NEXT RENNASIANCE  threads  and not here....   just a  friendly comment.





Don't look at me, the mods moved it here from the General Boards.


Do not question the mods. They are all powerful. This thread has actually been cleaned up for some naughty little posts instead of locked (Thank you uber muchly, Jurymen!)


If I haven't made a Commando part yet I'll get to work on it. If I have then I'll try to update it. I can't really remember what happened between now and 3 seconds from a moment ago.

#11200003913 04/19/2006 06:40:35 Re: Choice ~ By ZippydaSquirl.
lol. i would expect nothing less from somebody named zippydasquirrel. nice poem
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