Ok this is my first (and in my opinion poor) attempt at a haiku. Tell me what you think of it.
(Oh and the name makes you think of Neo but its not about him. If you think you know what i am getting at feel free to post it.)
The Power Of One
Sleeping awake
Dreaming, going insane
Alone I sit
Freely trapped
Walking, still asleep
No purpose
Hum of power
I am one
Within lies more
Red pill, small thing
Made known new
Things already I knew
Why must I be
The one
Who must choose
Strength released
Power unleashed
I am whole
Message Edited by Braids-Omega on 01-09-200604:48 PM
