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What strikes me most about this portion of the story is the conflict between dream and reality. I think this is my favorite part of the story so far, simply because of the fact that it brings it back to the Matrix basics. What Ex really ha...

Mnemasyne wrote: I want you to dwell on the memory of the moment you first asked the question - when you first realized the world around you was a lie. Remember... Remember how unsettling that felt. Remember how much it meant to know the t...

Glad to see the second portion so soon! It surprised me at first to see the other perspective, the other side of the looking glass if you would allow me the cliche. It was interesting to see how similar her thoughts were to Ex's, seeming t...

As a fan and student of flash fiction, I must say that this is one of the better Matrix niche stories I've come across. I'm not usually bothered to check NR, but I'm glad I stumbled upon this 4-parter. What I particularly liked about it wa...

Good riddance.

So no MS. What are the clarified rules for as madbent put it, "heals...mobius...pills/tbs?"